Having recently finished editing and revising my first novel, I’ve had time to reflect on that part of my writing journey and it’s taught me quite a lot about the way I write first drafts.
Reading through the first two or three chapters, I noticed certain words cropping up much more often than was necessary, so I started making a list and had it open all the time I edited. My list comprised:
Every time I came across one of these words I removed or changed it (or the sentence), except for the odd occasion where ‘that’ or ‘just’ actually worked better. The effect this had on the writing was surprisingly marked. The sentences flowed better, I used more appropriate descriptive words and phrases and I ‘showed’ rather than ‘told’.
The other side of this was where I found myself against the ropes. Some of the sentences didn’t make sense when these words were removed and I had to dig deep into my creative wellspring to rework them. This was quite a large learning curve and despite the angst it caused, I’m glad I had to punch my way through it.
The way I see it, this can only make me a better writer in the long run. Now when I write, I have the list of words in my brain and when I see myself typing them I stop, look and correct the text immediately.
Of course, this is on top of all the grammatical checking, the reading aloud, checking timelines were accurate – the list is endless, or that’s how it seems . . . at first. But, perseverance pays off and my novel is now in the hands of my beta reader. I’m nervously awaiting the feedback yet I’m not as daunted by having to revise or edit again, not like I was in the beginning. I’ve learned a great deal from this experience and it’s all good.
Maybe it won’t take me as long to edit my next piece of work. Here’s hoping.
What extraneous words do you find keep cropping up in your writing? How do you feel about the editing and revising process? Does it fill you with dread or do you look forward to it?